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- nessdog0
The slope of the 'ii's makes it look unbalances.
- DavidFelt0
cheers guys, back to the drawing board I go! might try to redo the one with the indian wheel in, ditch the elephants and cobras and redo the type, cant afford to spend too long on this one!
cheers anyway dudes!
- kelpie0
yup, the i's throw it off, especially the dots...
the fan thing from the flag in there?
the single vanishing point is kind of off kilter too. strip it back, go to lunch and pick it up again after, it'll all come to you then :)
*smugly puts down book of patronising advice
- DavidFelt0
hola kelpie, im out! get some scran and then ill play around with it a little more, ill post another thread lata!
cheers
- DavidFelt0
all the shields, im currently going to start working up another idea, but tell me if you think any of these are worth a look!
NIce one
- ********0
Nope. Sorry.
- gruntt0
how about using only the circle from the flag?
- DavidFelt0
yeah maybe, i still quite like the shield tho, its a nice shape with the taj mahal atop it, but i need something to go in it!
- gruntt0
fill it with curry.
- kelpie0
I liked the half wheel - try that
something looks odd about the towers, though I know why you see them as neccessary.
hmmm, tricky one
- DavidFelt0
gonna try half the wheel with the taj mahal cut out from it... ill post it up when it looks half decent
- kelpie0
cool
*edge of seat ;)
- DavidFelt0
false alarm, it looks tosh so i wont bother. gonna have a break from it, see if i get a new perspective on it when i come back to it1
- gruntt0
good idea. little brain break.
- kelpie0
boo hiss!!
good luck.