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- DavidFelt
Quick logo crit please for a parent company, (mail order company primarily), called 'indian inspirations'
She likes the Taj Mahal element but said my first concepts were a little busy so this is the result of me striping it down, what does everyone think? any feedback is welcome, Cheers!!!!!!
- ********0
aye-aye
Like it Dave, reminds me of an acorn at first glance too though, is that intentional?
- kelpie0
lovely, really nice :)
- toe_knee0
awesome. love it.
I prefer the one without the circle as the circle dwarfs the font.
- DavidFelt0
Im kinda stuck with it creatively, I think it could be waaaay better but im kinda in a bit of a rut with it, gotta transfer it to all the expected stuff, bus cards, letterheads etc, and normally at this stage im full of ideas for them, but today im not really getting it.
What do you guys think i could maybe do with this logo, I know it needs 'something' but dont know what that 'something' is!!!!!
- kelpie0
What do you guys think i could maybe do with this logo, I know it needs 'something' but dont know what that 'something' is!!!!!
DavidFelt
(Oct 6 05, 03:07)*considers setting up a consultancy account for Dave ;)
- Bluejam0
not convinced.
like the typography.
not keen on the mark/symbol - doesn't look right. i'd ditch the shield, too UPS
- DavidFelt0
LOL @ Kelpie, you should mate, youd make a killing!
I kinda like the shiield, but not sure the two 'i's warrant being in it.... stick with the two i's or the shield, or both, hmmmmm, im confused, back to the drawing board me thinks!
- kelpie0
LOL @ Kelpie, you should mate, youd make a killing!
-------ha, I think not mate, your OK on your own - good luck with it, repost if you get anywhere :)
- Dancer0
Back again Mr. Felt?
Yeah I like the look but I feel the logo looks like a face like = :s
(hope you understand that).Perhaps simplfy and turn into something like a franking stamp to give the impression of miling out?
I reckon theres alot to go on here, Make it more indian, research??
Can we see some of your earlier concepts, if you can be fucked
- DavidFelt0
earlier concept that is a little too 'busy'.
- kelpie0
good comments dancer
christ on high, am I on fucking happy pills today?!
*checks contents of glass of water
- kelpie0
hmmm, I like the type more on the old one for a start... one of those re-works where it's lost and gained something eh?
- Dancer0
I really like that, a little fiddley mind.
That centre swirl, what's that?Use that as a frank.
nice work Dave, keep plugin'
- DavidFelt0
Its the wheel from the centre of the indian flag, get it!!! ooh im clever! LOL
Not keen on the elephant and cobra shit, and dont like the type on the old one, wait on a sec ill post up another idea
- DavidFelt0
some variations on the shiled idea with the taj mahal towers incorporated!
I think this may be why im getting nowhere, i may have been looking at this too much!
- ********0
The two i's on the new one remind me of two deformed kids shuffling down the street. The one to the right clearly being the more dominant and is probably leading the other one into some sort of trouble. That might just be me though.
- kelpie0
lol, actually I can see that :/
- DavidFelt0
heres the two i's idea with the flourishes
I quite like this one, think it will stand alone as a mark without the typo well too, but I can see the problem with the i's that skt and kelpie just noticed! argh
anyways, what about this layout? I can always change the i's
- ********0
I don't think the mark is that well balanced. A bit top heavy with the towers vanishing to the same point...
- Dancer0
Yeah, not feeling it.
Not digging the i's