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- Crouwel0
i must say i like the idea of the illustration as well, no. 6.
it may need some work, but it is kind of charming, less cold and clinical..
- Crouwel0
top right.
i like it more if there's only one foot, and i like how the symbols of the foot and cross sort of come together through the shape of the frame they are in, they flow down towards each other, thus melting clinic and foot together.
- todelete__20
3rd one down on the left
- rockonski0
what brooke said
- MLP0
i like the top left... you definitely need to pay attentnion on your negative space for printing... but how small will they really use it?
- piperboytoy0
i like 3,5 most.
- stevegee0
I like the top right with the two outter shapes but think you should combine the ankle in one of the two shapes as opposed to a cross or a second footpront. I might paly with four of those leafy shapes in an effore to make the negative space push a cross out. maybe a footprint in top left and ankle in lower right and other two tinted out a bit.
- dirtydesign0
I like the 2nd down on the left.
If you NEED to include the ankle illustration, just tweak that last one, it's not bad. The negative space just looked a little wierd to me.
- nburlington0
I'd scrap the footprint. When you pair it with the cross it looks like something from a wayfinding system.
- uberdesigner0
they all look sort of like the blue cross logo
- spmitch0
^
- tymeframe0
i concur with teh brooke
- kindofblue0
The foot reversed out of the blue boxes (1 & 2) will be hard to reproduce/print at small sizes. It is already filling in at current size.
- brooke0
Top left - but only one foot.
- spmitch0
yes said he liked them all but thought I needed to include the ankle...
- e_b_c0
Has the doc seen any of these yet?
- kingcatcole0
I like the second on the right, but it might have to do with the illustration, reminds me of life drawing.
I'd like to see the cross on the ankle of the front foot, I don't know, might be interesting.
- gruntt0
sorry, wrong thread
- kyl30
FOURTH DOWN ON THE LEFT
- spmitch0
the "doctor" thought the identity mark needed to include the ankle as well as the foot....hence the crap illustration on the right