What do you think?
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- Maneuver
Short film I just finished called SUSTAIN
http://www.maneuver.co.uk
- ********0
I think its really hard to get a crit here today.
As for the film, thought it was awreet.
- ********0
short my arse.
heavy though. good music. nice movement. good animations. i liked it.
- radar0
I liked it overall, I think the intro could be shortened a bit to get to the info quicker, The pulsing light in the background started to give me a headache by the end, so maybe tone that down a bit.
Overall looked nice though.
- robotron3k0
It's got a nice dance beat, i'll give it a 7
- theplanet0
Dude-
You have alot of good stuff there. Tight animation, creative transitions,it would be better if it were half as long, by the time your point is made most people will be bored.
The graphs and charts you show at the end are interesting, but the way you presented them could be presented on a piece of paper.
I hope this doesnt sound overly critical, I really liked the piece, I think you could tighten it up and move it from good to really great.
Thats what i think.
Josh
- Maneuver0
Thanks for the responses guys much apperciated
- phatlee0
Nice, the only things I would say is maybe shorten the number of facts, I got bored half way through and they were on for too long. Also I'd get rid of the floating credit at the end, I can see what you have tried to achieve, but it just doesn't look right. Very nice though...
7/10
- Elfangio0
I liked, but I also thik you can tigh it up a little more, short it up - sintetized it a little more. Good work anyway...
HAsta™
- codfather0
I liked it.
- Nairn0
Generally, nice - but I'm not well-versed in this sort of thing...
What's the music?
- Nairn0
'nice'.
What a shitty little word.
Have a hearty "Güt Schtuff" and a pat on the back instead!
- Maneuver0
Thanks for your honesty and advice. Cheers guys.