What do you think?

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  • theplanet0

    Dude-
    You have alot of good stuff there. Tight animation, creative transitions,

    it would be better if it were half as long, by the time your point is made most people will be bored.

    The graphs and charts you show at the end are interesting, but the way you presented them could be presented on a piece of paper.

    I hope this doesnt sound overly critical, I really liked the piece, I think you could tighten it up and move it from good to really great.

    Thats what i think.

    Josh

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