site crit please
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- leftwave
hi, i'm working on a design for a high-end furniture store in california. all feedback is welcome:
http://leftwave.com/henredoncali…
thanks!
- version30
no instant problems or complaints
seems clean enough
- nopublik0
nice work dude! ;)
- -wtfwjd0
Looks really nice.
I'd say the phone numbers in the top right are maybe too large.
- dbloc0
looks good. leftwave is not a dude right?
I would say that the footer is a little large..
- leftwave0
thanks for the feedback guys.
for the record, i'm still not a dude.
- version30
but you're working on it? :)
- visualplane0
Overall I like the way it looks. What bothers me at first sight is the wood texture on the top. It looks dirty, and gangly. All the other patterns are a beauty, but please change that wood. It's looking cheap or something.
- saroose0
i think theres enough detail and texture in the main content area to lose the background. but i'm in a heap at the moment
- dbloc0
leftwave...Is that you surfing in your profile pic?
- leftwave0
yup, that's me surfing.
no, i'm not getting a sex change.
- version30
thank god, last thing we need around here is another dude
good work leftwave
- dbloc0
nice. looks like you've got some style. We are plagued with red tide right now and that shit gets me sick every time so I'm avoiding it.
- cram0
looks pretty good. nice wave too. i wonder how some of this is going to transition to html but if you can get it to work... the body copy is sort of wacky on the kerning too... i know that this will change in html but your client might not. then again, your client might not notice... still make it as good as you can, huh?
- sureshot0
i like it
*thumbsup
- Shimshai0
Very nice and pleasing design.
The background is maybe a bit too busy, there's already a lot of texture in de design.