Logo Crit
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- zoiks
BioTech Company
- moveinspace0
The logo is getting there, however i too much is going on. 3 leaves, drop of liquid, and syringe looking thingy. Simplify it. I suggest you remove the thing you like the most. That helps me in logo desingn.
- lvl_130
i like it, but i think it looks too clunky. the idea and colors are nice, i just think that it could be refined/simplified.
also when used small, it's virtually unreadable.
- radar0
It comes off as more of a plant nursury or something and the text looks crammed together.
I like the dropper, but the green and the leaves confuse the situation.
- ********0
i like the idea, but the type is too black and tightly kerned. too much black in one spot, too dense..
try to look at it from a distance, it's hard to see/read..
imho.
- moveinspace0
$#^%#^%^%#^% misspelled
design
- agentfour0
simpliiffyyyyyyyyyyy...man
- Bluejam0
Keep it simple
- dirtydesign0
Yeh, there's a lot going on there.
Keep it simp. Open up that type a bit maybe.
- techma0
Good start, but looks a little busy. Maybe use just one budding leaf and a less rigid font? Just an idea.
- i_monk0
Tech Works + Leaves + Dropper = confusion. The name doesn't suggest either of the graphic elements to me. I know you can't change the name of the client, but you have to work with it.
And I agree with the other crits, it's too busy and too black.
- t_rock0
Yeah... a little too busy. Also, the proportion on the letterhead seems too big.