resume crit
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- bigbaby53
A little input please.
- jevad0
cant even fuckin read it the type is so small...
- tedlemont0
Make your name bigger.
- stringbean0
Make your name bigger.
tedlemont(Jul 21 05, 15:49)
ha!
- Jaline0
Make your name a bit smaller. It's an alright concept.
- visualplane0
make your resume legible, that's a plus ;)
- spendogg0
Helllooooo. 1987.
orange is teh new piss yellow.
- tank0
what the crap.
are you one of those guys who discoverd photoshop and thinks he is a designer?
go home.please.
- tank0
whats with the photo man?i"m only 1/4th on it so i'm gonna use it 4 times in a row to make up for that?
- Jaline0
I have no problems with orange, but I agree about the problems with the photo and some of the text.
- tank0
uhm yeah my remarks where a bit harsh..sorry first reaction...use only one photo if you want to use one.
use the dots at your name,or make them smaller and change of the opaciity of them to 10 percent.its to busy now.
now maybe instead of using black orange..use black-grey-orange..
the overall is to busy.
make your name smaller and a different font.
- tank0
oh yeah..
that reference bit..its to close to the edge of the paper,its typographicley oncorrect
the with needs to breathe more.
same goes at the top....
- tank0
now..what is mulit-ad creator 6?
- Backward-Looking0
to much crap like thsoe circle pics on the bottom?? and no color just black on white. a resume should be faxable and not waste alot of ink printing it....
- spendogg0
keep it simple - knock them out with killer typography and show that you have sense of space, not that you need to fill up every inch of the page. keep the personaliztion to a minimum.
- skelly0
make it black & white.
the type is too dense, make it lighter.
name smaller.
it shouldn't be boring, but it shouldn't look over-designed either.
- visualplane0
bigbaby53 where are you? Laying in a fetal position?
- doesnotexist0
yes, i agree with skelly. make it black and white so it looks good printed off on any printer.
also redo that type, it is pretty bad. lose the dots near the top or use a line. the condensed/wide type doesnt go well together, but maybe that's just me.
your name and the address are way too big. use a grid to lay it out, might bring some order to it.
- jaylarson0
no objective
no references
KISS : keep it simple stupid:
simple title with name centered, underline optional,list experiences, perhaps bold title held,
specific months not needed
remove graphics. they distract. your audience just wants to find what they are looking for: your education and experiences.
if there is more i speak it... peace.
- doesnotexist0
do not center your type, for the love of god
- jevad0
ooooff
talk about getting torn a new one!