Logo Crit. Pls
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- nessdog0
I think #9 if you strip off everything except the balck areas.
lnu(Jul 6 05, 04:38)
Yeah try what Inu said. No 3-d bits. If you're running out of ideas, have a look in los / dos logos for a bit of 'inspiration'.
- codfather0
Hi ness,
thanks for your comment...yeah I'm not really that obsessed by it - to be honest I'm not a designer - I'm more into Photography. but just really needed a logo a little better that the old one (which looking back is pretty dire) - I think one of these two will do the job better:
tara!
- codfather0
OK, after some help from nessdog - I've come up with another version of logo two - any better?
- Soler0
No, no, and no.
The direction makes no sense. what does the triangle creating the "i" represent?
start over man, with this humble suggestion: Build the logoTYPE first. Make it work in BLACK only, so it reads. Once you have something there, THEN think about adding a graphic element or weathering it, etc.
Not trying to diss, just being honest man.
- nessdog0
the 'triangle' of the i is obviously a point.
It's getting better codfather. Did you try playing around with the last one I sent you?
- ********0
this is..
not too good.
start with research, what is the soul of the enterprise/organization? sketch from the ideas you get from the abstract and absolute qualities. don't use gimmicks based on name or obvious qualities.. i.e. if it is photo related do not force yourself to use an eye or a camera. you are not the only one who does that.
- ********0
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- codfather0
No, no, and no.
The direction makes no sense. what does the triangle creating the "i" represent?
Soler
(Jul 6 05, 10:41)Obviously a point! Doh!
- Soler0
Fine dude. listen to your homie nessdog. but that logo is shite and you're better off starting over.
- codfather0
Fine dude. listen to your homie nessdog. but that logo is shite and you're better off starting over.
Soler
(Jul 6 05, 11:02)Thanks for encouragement.
- Soler0
Hey, I gave you legit advice and you 2 seemed more interested in obsessing over my "point" point.
Obviously it's a point, but are seriously thinking that any person in the world would see that and say- "oh, that's point 101'? OF COURSE NOT!
Again, my humble advice: Don't get too graphic, since you're not a designer. Design a logotype, meaning ONLY text.
It'll be much cleaner. Don't force out a design if it's not in you.
And, 4 the record, I stood up for your site when all the heads here were bashing you, I told you to hang in there and gave you some advice on what to do, which takes time, liek I am right now.
If you'd prefer a yesman, by all means, I'm out.
- ScottTheRobot0
Shazaam.
- t_rock0
I like 10. The most interesting mark out of them all. It will also work better than most of the others at a small size.
- anon0
to the ones with critiques
don't listen to these design geeks, they are never satisfied and their egos are bigger than you can possibly imagine. etc.
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dopertee
(Jul 6 05, 05:14)so you know. i assume you're not allowed to have an opinion here.
so in that case, keep it like it is, it's ace! it's brilliant! best logo i've ever seen in my life. btw you might want to move the T a bit to the right.
- radar0
9
- nessdog0
mine were pretty wack too... but I just spent like 5 mins.
- anon0
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- Soler0
yeah ness, those are pretty wack.
Here goes: Take #4 of nesse, and take out the green 101. the logo would look like this:
point101
101 would be green, point would be gray. done. helvetica. word up.
- ScottTheRobot0
to the ones with critiques
don't listen to these design geeks, they are never satisfied and their egos are bigger than you can possibly imagine. etc.
D
dopertee
(Jul 6 05, 05:14)Isn't "Logo Crit. Pls" short for "Logo Critique Please" ?? You'll get what you ask for - especially when you say please.
- Soler0
nice site/work Scott