biz card crit ?
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- brains
anyone awake ?
take a peek.
- jevad0
bigger type man
- brains0
yeah ? I was thinking that. I don't know I am always deceived when it comes out printed.
- ingolfr0
its too plain ,
add a bevel+dropshadow
or something.
- jevad0
at least a couple points
I like the crest and colours though
- jarredbishop0
try different placments of the crest with it where it is at the moment it doesnt flow too well...
bigger type too..
nice.
- brains0
awesome. thanks guys.
- piperboytoy0
me like, but type size is a bit too big.
- caseyc0
2 thumbs down with the tongue out, sorry. Here's some crit:
1. You are trying to be subtle but the magenta/pink kills it. I would go with the green from the name side and maybe do the logo in brown (like a reverse from the other side)
2. The licking lions are overkill and look a little cheesy, the logo would be tits with just the b and the swoop v.
- brains0
thanks casey. that's a pretty clean looking idea.
- eficks0
as long as its printed sharply, i dont think the font size is a problem. thats just me though.
- brains0
well I thought that too. I always design alot smaller than I think I need to. because in print, it generally comes out alot bulkier than you plan on. Thing is though, I'll get some test prints done.
I'm trying to decide on the stock and stuff, I want a nice feel to the cards, on a heavier weight card..
- forcetwelve0
print it on a textured stock. it will make it really shine man. nice feel - just scale everyting up a little i would.
- jevad0
spot UV the logotype
- caseyc0
No problem man, good luck with that. I would go with http://4by6.com I did a card for a friend way back and he got the satin finish from them. It's the pimp shit.
- agentfour0
type looks good....dont make it any bigger.
- forcetwelve0
no... make it bigger!
haw haw
- jevad0
I do rather like the simplicity of casesys effort
- forcetwelve0
nice one brains. i like the green.
- brains0
ah oui, jevad, moi aussi. mais je suis déchirer.
oh, and casey, that satin finish seems niiiice.
