Site Critique
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- ArtDirector
Here's what I got so far:
How can I improve on it, what are your likes and dislikes?
thanks
- dan_dan_dan0
Looking Nice IMO.
- PonyBoy0
kind of need to see more...
... but it's nice a clean... the angles annoy the eye a bit... so they're probably a good thing.
- randoman0
mmm I just get to be what looks lie an interface, nothing else right now.
As for the interface itself, it looks a little too bland to me, a little like office stationary (I think the lines have something to do with it looking like index cards and enlvelopes.
I like the logotype, and the font is a good choice for Flash.
Can't really say much else now, but it looks like such an early stage. It might be easier once u have some content in there.
- piperboytoy0
The diag line in the nav box matches the 2 gray ones, but the diag line in the bigger rectangle is off. It looks awkward.
Not sure why you set the width and height to be 1250pixels, and you are only using about 30% of the space? so much white space.
- ArtDirector0
The diag line in the nav box matches the 2 gray ones, but the diag line in the bigger rectangle is off. It looks awkward.
piperboytoy
(May 14 05, 21:07)I didn't notice that, but now that you mention it, it does bother me. Anyone have a recommendation? I'm thinking of just getting rid of the the diagnal line on the bigger box
- NegativeSpace0
Looks good so far, I would open the aperature on the e at the end of your wordmark, to me it looks like a circle with a line thru the middle.
Keep us posted when you get the buttons working.
- randoman0
I thought it was there to act as a place holder... it's usually what you do to ashow here a picture will go. Yeah, get ride of it i would say. Also the huge line in the background..m not too crazy about that either. just my opinion.
- uhohseangettio0
Hellagoo...
- fate_redux0
At least it's not a rip
- honest0
i think the white is too much, you need to strengthen your greys for me. Staring at it too long will hurt my eyes and you'll get sued by these guys: http://www.rnib.org.uk
- tehgee0
i hate the logotype
- brains0
teh gee has spoken.
- brains0
you know, the offset grey diagonals aren't so bad. I agree with tg and the logotype, although I don't hate it , no, it's not so bad, in fact I like it. wait, that means, I don't dislike anything. except the white, which in it's own right is nice and simple. clean. I'd like to see alot of colors in the work, that would probably satisfy my eyes alot more..
but really the offset grey diagonals bring something to the layout. something not so conventional, but in a subtle way.
- leftwave0
I LOVE the reference to the pumpkins!!!!
- setsolid0
lets just put it this way...
the portfolio site will only look as good as your work in the site.
- ArtDirector0
I LOVE the reference to the pumpkins!!!!
leftwave(May 15 05, 00:03)
That's awesome you caught that. Much love
- lind0
I agree -- the diagonal lines are awkward. Maybe get rid of all the diagonal lines and use a more interesting and subtle line in the background -- the same width as the lines used in your logotype.
- leftwave0
hard to miss... i have a secret obsession with billy corgan!
- sureshot0
i dig it..good start.
And I assume you'll eventually get rid of the hor. scrollbar?
- Bureau0
I really dig it. I would like to see more. Keep it up!