Logo Critique
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- Bureau
What do you guys think of this?
- Jnr_Madison0
Is 'mortgagepower' meant to be one word?
- jarredbishop0
not sure about the yellow behind it... the green would look better and tie it all up nicer..
- beagle0
looks pretty powerful
- gfro0
space between bottom two words and your ready to go...nice
- warheros20
i would try using that brown or the green on the sun rays.
i just realized the green is a 'puke' green. are you okay with that?
i like what youve got going so far
- ArtDirector0
real nice...but either make the house bigger or the copy smaller
- brooke0
Try a dark blue instead of the green.
- Bureau0
Thanks for all the feedback guys. Im going to make some changes and post up a new one.
- Bureau0
Ok I made some changed based on everyones feedback and I also put together some color options.
- a-train0
i like the blue text in the last one... but the rays are still stickin out too much.... hmmmmm.... what about no rays?
- easy_target0
i like the blue with the red text
personally ; )
- Soler0
It's fine, done for what it is.
Looked at both quickly and they're the same, basically. pickin' the fly shit outta the pepper, man.
Drastically change it or be done and charge 'em the same as if you kept working! works like a charm
- forcetwelve0
blue and red—yanks love that stuff...
- ********0
pretty darn good, should hold up and smaller sizes and work just in black
- ********0
well, more i look at it - cant help but think the house could be a knockout, use the sun / shine as the positive and the house be negative / white...
- armed_rob0
the blue blue red logotype is the best one...
I think you need to clean the house illustation a bit...?
- Bureau0
Thanks everyone.
Magicpatch, Ill try knocking out the house.
- bulletfactory0
I like it, but the two things sticking out on either side of the roof of the house illi kinda bug me.
- ********0
makes me want muffins...