brochure crit
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- robbie_m
7 x 5 - 12 pager
my eps' look kinda wack on this pdf. its 2.8 megs. i havent bought the stock photos yet.
the last quote is begging for a typo...thanks in advance
- lifeinbinary0
had a quick look and i think it is kickass.
my only comments would be that i can see the white outline around some of circle intersections. is that supposed to be that way?
and i am not too crazy about the bottom border on page 2. otherwise it is a job very well done.
- ********0
very nice job, looks good
- lifeinbinary0
hahaha, i love the "women is like a tea bag" quote.
i thought it was gonna say something like "... when you are done you throw the bag away"
- robbie_m0
i was thinkin something like:
a woman likes the tea bag
those circles on the cover dont really have those wacky lines around them
- toe_knee0
looks cool.
cant believe theres a section called 'chocolate kiss'
- fresnobob0
your typography sucks
- robbie_m0
care to elaborate fresno?
- fresnobob0
that parapgraph with the type thats different point sizes is just horribly ugly. and some of the kerning could be adjusted. Im just not into it in general, you have some nice little touches like those circles, which would be better complemented by some interesting typography
- robbie_m0
i can appreciate that.
that copy is from the prev brochure the other designer did. i'm awaiting an update.its real hard to get proper kerning when you align the text edge to edge like that in quark
- toe_knee0
whats the deal with using those quotes??? are qoutes copyrighteded?
- robbie_m0
i dunno tony, i'll shoot eleanor roosevelt, shakespeare and aristotle an email and see if it's cool
:D
- robbie_m0
that forrest gump one is oh so lame though, i'll bring up that © issue tomorrow with the mkt group, hopefully it will get the axe
- JoshClancy0
The brochure is pretty good.
Few things
{these brackets are nasty}
they need to go.The quotes should not be all capital letters.
The quotes... are, umm, eh... interesting?
Overall tho ACE JOB
Love,
JOSH
- Duane0
Emailed ya.
- monNom0
the circled number for each swatch doesn't do it for me, i dunno if it's the font, or the fact that they're knockout, but something doesn't jive with the rest of it.
maybe a white circle with the colour as a stroke and the number in the same type as the list?
not really liking the green page either (with all the up-sized text). could be better.
- devaur0
Nice work!!
One small comment. The white line around some of the circles. Dont you love the way Acrobat PDF's create white lines around your transperancys! HAHA
You have my sympathy. I know your pain.