New site, critique?
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- blobeatblob
I'm a design student in Orlando, Florida. Just finished my portfolio site: http://www.blobeatblob.com - Anyone have a spare moment for a critique? would love some input.
- robbie_m0
your work and typography makes me smile.
your website navigation makes me want to go punch a homeless
it jumps around way too much
- ********0
for starters i would not have something on my portfolio is didn't make
http://www.blobeatblob.com/illus…
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http://www.lifeinvector.com/_htm…even if you used the tutorial
- warheros20
i concur.
bring it together more. maybe some elements that STAY IN THE SAME SPOT ya dig? gets kind of confusing when i try to look at something and the whole page changes to something completely different.
- blackspade0
my first question is
why is this a jpeg
which causes your text to look like poos ?
gif/png
- mrdobolina0
poos?
Maybe do a tutorial on iframes, they would work very well on this site.
- blobeatblob0
Awesome, thanks for the feedback. I've fixed the navigation. I prefer not to use iframes, I don't like how many browswers use them. Instead, I made the table holding the images a universal height.
- _salisae_0
i was wondering where you were, warheros
- canuck0
I would make use of a grid and re-arrange things. Bring your text size down too (links) it's taking up a lot of space. Basically maximize the space that you have, reduce scrolling.
Also connect your naviagtion a little better. When I veiw a piece of work I lose the sub nav. Aswell I keep having to scroll down to get to the main nav.
Anyway post it up once you've tweeked it.
- monNom0
I'd lose the swastika's. very inappropriate for a personal promotional piece, and IMO best left untouched unless your specificly referencing WW2
I'm a bit iffy on the red pepper too.
- warheros20
_salisae_, i was invisible i guess to everyone. nowo that i have v. 2 i can critique websites. it's way fun.
- setsolid0
try to use the grid, the contents seems to jump all over the page..
- RustyBadge0
Wow, you got rumbled - large style - with that pepper eh? Nae joy.
- blobeatblob0
Yep, some people didn't seem to like the pepper being posted. I can appreciate that, and their comments on the site.
- rabattski0
what's the deal with the red pepper?
makes everything not credible.
- rabattski0
and also don't mention what software you used.
i don't see a carpenter mentioning what he used either.
a hammer, a saw and some nails.
- josimarX0
http://www.blobeatblob.com/campa…
all looks a bit student-y and experimental to me, but it's got potential. I can imagine you looking back on it in 5 years and being embarrassed.
- josimarX0
ps, I posted that link to your NAZI logo to alert you it's the wrongest thing. looks shit and symbolises evil. doh.
- rabattski0
bummer that the nazi's abused / raped the swastika to start with though.
- Moo0
Some really nice work there I like the look of the site but I would have each image on your illustrations open in another window or a browser window just so i dont have to keep clicking back other than that I really like it keep it up