critique me!
- Started
- Last post
- 14 Responses
- jakeyj
ok not me but my site:
hit me with the good, bad, ugly, funny and/or constructive comments.
your pal,
- robotron3k0
ALL of it is sexy!
your hired.
- todelete__20
critique me!
ok not me but my site:you: nurd
your site: lovely. like the colors and layout. it may not be possible but the very first illustration isn't that strong and the rest of your work is. can you move it to the bottom, or middle somewhere. you should really put your strongest first.
- jakeyj0
thanks guys keep 'em coming...
- jakeyj0
don't make me bump me own thread
- fusionpixel0
Too much white space.
-
Everything seems to be flat on the left
-
the "view my sketchbook" its at the bottom of the page. I will miss it if I dont browse all the way to the bottom. which I only will if I want to see all the images.
-
The images seem scratted over the page, how about sections?
-
Add a title to new sketchbook page like "Sketch book 1" or something
-
add a way to main page from sketch book pages, in case some one was linked directly to that page they will find the way to the main page.
-
Nice stuff btw
- lvl_130
lovely work. i agree with kona as far as putting one of your stronger pieces at the top. i would also say to maybe get rid of your news section or place it below your work...it just doesn't really have a real relevance....or i don't know, it has relevance, but it's not that important or something...i don't know what i'm saying : ) good work though for sure. minneapolis represent!
- moondog0
i agree with kona about the first illy, which would be better elsewhere.
the stuff is gorgeous and deserves better than scrolling.
- lvl_130
maybe swap your 'view sketchbook' links with your news stuff. that's what i was trying to say above in my last post : )
- fusionpixel0
maybe he placed his best artwork at the top?
- jakeyj0
thanks for the comments guys.
hadn't thought about bringing the sketches to the top but i think i will.
oh man didn't realize my top one sucked so bad. basically i've just been adding the newest ones to the top...mabye i should just pull that one...
- crap0
You should develop a more personal style
I think there is alot of potential but it doesn't 'grab' me (yet)
- jakeyj0
ok last bump i promise. then i'll fade back into oblivion.
- fowler0
At first I thought it was, www.youshouldbelieving.com.. that would be pretty funny.
- jakeyj0
yah a coulple people said that before too, i guess it just looks too close.