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- rasko40
its shit.
- hotroddy0
but do the fonts load?
- rasko40
I was kidding, your fonts load fine... now give us the bitches. :)
- ********0
woswers.
- ********0
or wowsers.
- hotroddy0
You give me some first bitch.
- rasko40
it doesn't work that way
- hotroddy0
do you guys like it? My client wants me to change it completely. Ughhh.
- ********0
"youth, exclusive, contact"
careful now...
- rasko40
that shit will do, but I think you can do better... actually, I know you can.
- hotroddy0
do you think its too flashy?
- hotroddy0
rasko you want me to critque your work?
- iDp0
hmmm I think your client might be right.
- hotroddy0
finally a little construcitve criticsm.
- rasko40
Did I post my work for crit?
- piperboytoy0
It's kind of bland. There are so many examples of great photography sites that you can get your inspirations from. or event fashion sites, there are links from
http://www.hintmag.comFirst off I think you should drop the inner shadows in the photos, it makes it look amaturish.
Your fonts are still too small. I can only read the contact button. You shouldn't use san-serif typefaces on the web in that size. It's hard to read. You should use standard or some pixel font.
the Beauty Models type face is really dated looking. Not sure if it's your doing or the client's. Kind of reminds me of Glamour shots. I know you are trying for that elegant look, but it's not working all that well.
I'd suggest that you use only one image on the home page and then rotate that one. Slowly! Right now there are too many images fading in and out. Very distracting.
Why don't you make the site to fit within the browser? The black and white is really stark. It really looks dated. sorry
Have you done any competitive analysis or research? I hope I don't come off sounding rude . It's just my opinion.
- hotroddy0
All I really wanted to know from your panzy ass is if my fonts loaded.