Logo crit please
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- ********0
FUCKING LINK NOOB!!
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sorry, i see this is your first post.
welcome to Newstoday.
- BigDee0
its very early in the morning here, im tired and i added in an extra space... a THOUSAND apologies.
Any constructive criticism gratefully received,
cheers
- markd0
nice concept..seems very retaily to me.
Not liking the motion of the animation though..it'd be more solid without it.
- instantok0
i like the concept...looks a little rough though...rendered kinda jagged and the stroke weights are not consistent...just clean it up a bit and should be fine
- a-train0
I really cant say that I like the Aqua gradient. Make it sold and maybe dont make it 'spring'?
- BigDee0
gotta admit im pretty useless when online stuff together so refining the animation is definitely on the list.
Ive actually just put together a front page for my folio which is white on black - looks much stronger so may revert to that.
thanks for comments.
- SCarrier110
i like ithe concept, just need to make it look nicer.
- piperboytoy0
yeah I agree, the gradients and springy animation makes your logo look amateurish.
the spring needs to have a bit more style to it. But good work tho.
- nosaj0
I like the idea. Not a fan of the Helvetica Neau thin or Swiss font face and ditch the gradient. If you want to give it some depth try using 2 tints of the same colour.
- jevad0
"FUCKING LINK NOOB!!"
hahhahahahah
- iDp0
btw...you didnt add a space, the damn NT does that. You need to enter the h t t p : / / then the rest and everything will be golden. Welome to NT.
I like how clean your concept is, I agree though it needs a little cleaning...the gradients seem a little uniform, which makes them look 'designed'...leave your mark without leaving any traces.
Cheers!
- agentfour0
1. fuck the animation off
2. get rid of gradient
3. use one or 2 solid colours
- iDp0
fuck off the animation...but forget the rest of agentfours advice, I think its got character.
- warheros0
start over.
just my opinion.
- jevad0
I like scotch
scotch scotch scotch
- Nairn0
Needs more quim.
- forcetwelve0
welcome to NT - remember - although these guys sound harsh sometimes (me included) all is meant as constructive critiscism.
i agree with the comments - i'd lose both helvetica thin and the gradient and consider two tints of one strong colour. concept could work though. keep it up...
- BigDee0
Well its up there for all to see so I expected a variety of comments.
And as for being harsh, people dont have a lot of time and say it how they see it, so I wont take it to heart...
Cheers for the comments.
- forcetwelve0
good onya bigdee - done any more to the logo?