Logo crit, please
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- brozilla
http://www.brainwareinteractive.…
background: logo is for an elearning desgn co.(self promo). eLearning as in designing/developing interactive learning sites for the web/cd.
I am trying to play off the name, so I came up with the idea of a label.
Thoughts on font, balance, meaning, etc. apperciated.
- johndiggity0
rethink the proportions, i can barely see a lot of the elements on my screen.
- swollenelbow0
make it bigger...i want to see the guys face.
- blaw0
with the general shape as it stands you are going to have a lot of trouble making it all legible.
as posted it's a pretty big logo, yet still too small to recognize many of the elements.
now picture it even smaller, say on a business card.
- k0na_an0k0
bigger. but i like what little i see so far.
- brozilla0
ya, I've been wondering a bit about the size. I havent attempted to constrain it yet, but If you all are having troubles at this size, welp...got some work to do.
Thanks for the feed back
- raelou0
i like #4
some elements are not going to work well if your logo has to print small.
- winter0
#2 for me. i'd consider costumizing a distinctive typeface though; so that one could recall the mark even when it's not there.
nice job.
- Spix0
i like it...#4
- ross0
fax it to yourself at half an inch in size... if you can still recognize it, you've succeeded...
may need to be simplified, but thats just my opinion, and who am i...
- Donvitoviti0
#4 .. best all around
- peteski0
"fine" is good for fine dining and fine wine -
doesn't really fit with eLearning.I think the script fits well with the character. lose all the framing (circles and banners) and try just the character (yes to bigger) and the script and watch your kerning. squeeze it.
- spiralstarez0
how will you use it?
it's already big for internet use (and I am assuming by the title that's what is primary intention is) and I can't read or make out some of the elements.
If you wanted to use it big on a splash page it works, but on a website in a header it's going to be too big, or if you want to put a small icon link to yourself on a site you've done (in the footer or something) or somewhere else where it has to be small, then it's not going to work at all...
the logo itself is well done, I say #4
- brozilla0
thanks for all the great comments. I've been wondering about the size issue for print (cards, lh's). I've got some ideas to play around with. One idea is constrain the logo a bit but not too much, fade it down...then use it like a water mark, but don't know what the print costs would be for that.
Again, thanks for the feedback.
- tymeframe0
does each logo need the tag line?
- tymeframe0
number 4 works with the border.
Drop the taglines and only use them where needed.