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- knars0
02.
- liquid0
02........ 01 alternate
- Dublao70
I like the outline around five, but I'd rather see it spelled out like 1 and 2
- gruntt0
i'm diggin' 2.
1 is my second choice. the others are interesting but too hard to read.
there. i've given my feedback. now please send me some free samples. california rolls please. thanks.
- k0na_an0k0
2 is ace.
- shame0
010205
- johndiggity0
thanks. carifornra rorrs gruntt?
- clerk0
#01
but the text in white?
- armed_rob0
02 is the best one!
maybe try moving the sticks away form the lettering...
It could grap one of the i dots with the TM in it??Just a quick idea....
- spendogg0
i like your thinking on the last two - but when i squint my eyes it looks like BUSHI - if you can figure out how to make it a little more readable you will have something brilliant
- johndiggity0
thanks so far. i have been trying on the last 2 for a while, but i cannot figure it out. keep it coming.
- mr_snuggles0
# 2 is great, just move or size down the 'TM'
- tny0
i like two, too
- SoulFly0
I like #1 and #2.
I think #1 looks bright on the screen but probably looks real nice on print.I would remove TM from that location all together and place it on the right side.
- lvl_130
first my eyes went straight to 3 liked it and easy to read. then i really looked at 2...and then back at 3. 2 is the way to go. at first though i thought the chopsticks and the tm was forming a teepee and that threw me off for a second
- contia10
number one, pops!
- _b_0
I really like the way you've tried to deal with the redundant "ushi" in 3 4 5 6 and 7.
but its not quite there, maybe try tones/colors to break up the two words and help with legibility, like maybe with the "ry" black and the "s" and "ushi" red. I'd keep trying along those lines though, its more ballsy and will take more effort to get right, but I reckon the result would be worth it.
- Soler0
1 and 2 so you're pretty much done. the others won't stand. they just won't stand, man.
- johndiggity0
i want to get the last ones to work, but the consensus seems to be a hybrid of 1 and 2. so thank you all who have particpated. i'll get cracking on round 2.
- spendogg0
make the last two work dammit