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- pablokorona
not a site yet, but still planning it out before i collaberate with the coder.
we will be embedding fonts, the clouds will be a looping flash movie with their new stadium to be in the foreground with the clouds over.
with that, http://www.dwerksinc.com/riverha…
- heavyt0
is it all in Flash?
if so, why?
if not, why are you using that font for the body text?
entirely too little info for a homepage. Hopefully the coder will talk you out of that.
TR1
- pablokorona0
the top bar including the cloud movie will be a flash file. the rest will be css based, with a php backend. yeah, i'm going to change the body text to arial.
good call.
- g3kk0k1d0
cool :) keep going my young padawan
- abizzyman0
the gradient is sooo painful, dude.
at least get rid of the horizontal gradient behind the body and kill the gradient behind the navigation.
you need a zingy color in there too... I'm so bored looking at it... booooring - and it's because it needs a little somethin' somethin' to stand out.
Perhaps just pop in a really blunt light blue... or a yellow or something.
I realize this is team-colors you're working with... but it needs to warm up a little - and getting rid of the gradients may help.
- pablokorona0
biz - i took your considerations
http://www.dwerksinc.com/riverha…
the body text i'm not happy with .. but i'll solve this with the coder.
- warheros0
your icon and everything around that compared to the content and some of the adds doesnt fit at all.
also the fonts in your nav and then the title font in the news are clash to me. continuity, my friend.
- mikotondria20
I think there are too many fonts..
- pablokorona0
sleep now, i revamp in the morn.