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- Rand0
nice!
- JamesEngage0
you love a 'leisure cottage'
- bulletfactory0
I like the feel that it has to it.
One suggestion though...... I'm noticing that the cross on the t is really the only straight line in the mark... What if you had the ascender of the d next to it come back and form the crossbar of the t?
That of course may not play nicely with the "swoop" to the left of it though.
oh well - just thinking out loud.cheers,
t
- DutchBoy0
cheers!
the clients wife (yes his wife, some self-proclaimed style-guru! urgh) did not like the image in the on the other side.
i am going to kill both now, please don't tell anyone..
i'll bury them under the cottage.
- pascii0
at least you don't eat them
- DutchBoy0
james, is leisure cottage not a good word?
please be honest with me cuz it was cottage at first but to my feeling the word needed to be longer, ie consist of two words like the others..
do you have better suggestions?
- JamesEngage0
it just brings to mind the word 'cottaging'... normal people probably won't think twice about it.
- DutchBoy0
stop leaving me in the dark, James.
so what does 'cottaging' suggest??
- MLVR0
nice work db... what does the style-guru-wife say if you just use the image as a silhouette? I think it may be easier for her to appreciate. not so busy.
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Have you tried different colours? I think it need a bit more 'sting' to feel right. Anyway good work my friend!
- DutchBoy0
cheers, MLVR. Good comments, i am thinking of using it as a silhouette indeed and low on contrast, sort of like a watermark.
- iLotion0
'Cottaging' is an activity undertaken by homosexuals - I believe that young James is projecting his repressed sexuality onto your work...
- DutchBoy0
ah, ok, cheers iLotion.
but if you use urbandictionary you'll find out no word is safe to use anymore..
so f# that.
:)
- iLotion0
true that... nice work btw - tell wifey to go fook herself.
- JamesEngage0
i'm not young
- tomkat0
but you are james
- johndiggity0
i would have sexual intercouse with that biznesssss card. it's hot. and remember, it's not a crime unless you get caught!
- grayhood0
nice work dutch, like the image and the type my only comment would be to tweek how the j and g connect withthe bottom swirl. but that is being pretty picky. nice over all.
- DutchBoy0
yes, grayhood, i have been tweaking with that a lot as well..
real hard.. first i made it crossing lines.. now it is "touching" the lines.. what do you reckon would be better?
- Blofeldt0
God here.
I'm revising your estimate on your own greatness and have decided that, in fact, you're a twat!
Ciao G
-xox-