Site critique plz
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- ortablaze0
guess the problem is the overpowering tech design.
I'll see what i can do to keep the golf club the main focus while still looking techy since that's what they're looking for.
Using a different texture may help but may kill the tech look they want...any suggestions?
thanks for ur time guys.
- jevad0
You can achieve a strong tech look without making it look like a spaceship intercom : )
Good structure, grid, and content will rule them all.
- ortablaze0
spaceship intercom...hahah
thanks for the pointers dude
- DutchBoy0
interesting example, jevad..
altho i think the structure there is rather chaotic.
- brozilla0
i think you can still achieve the techy look, just soften some of the lines and use lighter colors and gradients around the club
- ortablaze0
didn't want to start from scratch again...hope this version has a beter balance. thoughts?
- ********0
it looks the same to me.
- jevad0
better!!
the menu still isn't doing much for me though - it's seems out of place and not very integrated....the colours and type aren.t doing their job....
- ortablaze0
thanks for the input jevad.
nick here's the previous version:
- mr_snuggles0
I think you need a new image of the club. Everytime I see that page I think it looks like some sort of helmet.
- ortablaze0
gotcha...i think i've had enuff people telling me the club is not too obvious...i'll change it now
I just thought that this shot was the best out of all was given to me...but I'll use my second choice which is angled and more obvious
- ortablaze0
mr snuggles, is this more recognizable?
- mr_snuggles0
Same url or are you secretly giving me the finger?
- ortablaze0
yes, same url..my bad, no finger intended
- mr_snuggles0
It's a bit better, I don't know how much more you can do? I reckon a golf enthusiast would see it for what it is. I think with what your client wants and has supplied you with, you've done a good job.