Site critique plz
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- ortablaze
my eyes are dead....need fresh eyes for feedback..thanks guys.
- stewart0
howly sh!t
your first attempt was way better, this is a bit over the top, don't you think?
or is this another website...
- ortablaze0
really..damn!
- Elfangio0
This is for a golf driver, right?
What about a little more golf image, dunno some grass, nature in harmony with the tech.
I am not say that isn't good, I am just saying maybe its not the best approach, looks like some raizor brand or something! My 2cent
- jeeto0
Seems like the club needs to be on a mellow background. The above reccomendation of the course may help colorwise to boost it more.
- ortablaze0
client is looking for a tech/industrial look...i don't really agree that it's the best theme to showcase the golf club but that's what they're lookin for...thanks for the feeback so far, keep em commin...i need to finalize this shortly.
- welded0
It's some cool imagery, but my personal preference is to avoid the brushed metal thing like the plague. I like the idea of a nature-tech harmony thing.
- gabe0
i don't really think the brushed metal, etc. is necessarily bad, in fact i think it's probably the right direction to go. but, i do think it's a little "heavy", for lack of a better term.
i would assume it's a pretty lightweight driver, so i think the site should feel "light" overall as well.
- ortablaze0
haha. i know brush metal is over used...just took the short cut since it's so easy to make...i'll see if i can find an alternate texture. know of any texture sites?
- spiralstarez0
I agree with the crit above...
If you are trying to show off the driver you should contrast it a little more from the background.
All the background and interface is brushed metal kind of eye-candy and shiny, so is the club. Maybe try doing something to make it more prominent.
Also, not sure that the nav font is working for me, but I'm not coming up with coherent reasoning behind my opinion so maybe it's just my mood before I go to bed here :-)
Have fun.
- gabe0
try to give the site a little room to breath. it all feels so crammed and forced...
i think you can incorporate subtle related colors as well, a little green and some white might help break it up a little
- cucumbrrr0
Shaft guide... ha. It's late.
- ortablaze0
is this better:
- jevad0
IMPO
The frame of the website is taking ALL the attention away from the lines of the club head.
You want to keep it simple and really let the product lead this....
- brozilla0
as my eye flows across the page i am drawn to the contrast b/n the lights and darks of the lighter bg and darker inner circle. to me, the club head gets lost along the way. there's no pop as a result. maybe a little more white in the inner circle bg?
to my eyes, anyway.
looks pretty damn good, though.
- ortablaze0
good point...I'll tone the frame down a bit
- ricstultz0
what site?... I only see a picture of a golf club.... it took me a second to figure out it was a golf club.
- ********0
agree with jevad.
the design of the interface TOTALLY overpowers the design of the club.
the techy look is way over the top... but if they're sold on it then just make it really clean and subdued, instead of the in-your-face stuff you have going on right now... think light gray gradients and whatnot.
- jevad0
^ what dude said
- DutchBoy0
yeah jevad and nick just said what i was about to say.
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