Biz card crit
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- JamesEngage0
don't know if it would make me want to hire you as a photographer, or vice versa
- k0na_an0k0
blueman with that yellow?!? weird.
- agentfour0
not too keen on the yellow or the grey keyline. maybe use the blue from your logo with white text on it.
- mr_snuggles0
Doesn't really come accross that you're either a photographer or a designer. The lack of structure doesn't really speak to anyone in the design world.
- Blueman0
First off it's not Yellow! it's orange, second of all .. it's a attention grabber and an element of my logo, the (&) is orange and I also wanted a similar structure to my site. http://www.bluemandp.com
keep the comments coming
- JamesEngage0
yellow / orange... looks out of place... even if you have chosen it because it is complementary...
because you've got a color on either end of the range, any imagery you use with it will just get lost in the middle (if that makes sense)
- k0na_an0k0
if you can't take constructive criticism you shouldn't be a designer friend.
- save0
shite shite shite shite shite shite shite shite shite shite shite shite!!!!!!!!!!
shite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- JamesEngage0
i'd do something as simple as a blueprint... using keylines as preloaders etc... start with an idea not just a typeface you like.
- Blueman0
kOna_anOk .. dude.. way off there on your comment. Just because you think the yellow is weird and I said it's orange doesn't mean that I can't take constructive criticism.. besides .." Yellow is weird" comment you made isn't that constructive.
- stewart0
1. start with an idea
good one.
- JamesEngage0
it's a good idea to start with a good idea
- save0
I've never seen anything so lame...."Blueman" and the cards fucking yellow!!!!!!! ........
wank...
- mr_snuggles0
Maybe do the card double-sided then, with just you're wordmark on one side and the info on the reverse, or if it's gonna be single-sided, decrease the size of your logo, I know you want it predominent, but it's way too big and you want to create a bit more space around it. Shift it over to the right to align it with yer email addy. I think that's the best I can give with the design as is.
- JamesEngage0
why called blueman anyway?
were your family blue years ago... must of had an idea for calling yourself that in the first place?
- k0na_an0k0
I actually said this.
blueman with that yellow?!? weird.
k0na_an0k
(oct 19 04, 07:08)Meaning BLUE(as in the color)man with that yellow?!? weird.
Meaning you would think it would work BETTER if it were blue rather than ORANGE.
Good luck with the snappy attitude when things don't go your way.
How about this.
OH GOD I LOVE IT! MASS PEODUCE A MILLION! I WANT TO HIRE YOU NOW YOUR BRILLIANT!
There. Now carry on.
- Blueman0
save... it's ORANGE... adjust your monitor or your eyes..
- besides the colour what don't you like about it.. is it because it's not like yours? or is it because it's too simple for you? You don't like the type because? you don't like the placement of the logo because? be a little more specific rather than saying "wank______!!!!____!_ !_!_!_!_!__!_!_!_!_! __!____!!! "
That's not really gonna help me.
- save0
hahahaha
- slinky0
blueman... your portfolio is not bad.. but that card in no way shows the work your capable of.
- mr_snuggles0
Contrary to popular opinion, I don't think you need to use blue just because it's in yer name...