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- jaybee
nearly ready to upload my site.
but would like to know what my online family thinks about it!cheers!!!
- Elfangio0
Its nice, like it BUT you could put that font a little bigger...
- jaybee0
i was thinkin' the same thing but the pixel fonts are nasty when bigger than 8pts...............
- lvl_130
looks nice. that yellow font on the blu background (in the about section) is really hard on the eyes though. maybe a dif. color text?
- bomy_dick0
yep, it's simple and nice but i don't like the colors ,really. the blue, yellow, very hard to read
- radar0
Is there only one thing in the work section, or am I missing something?
Also, the yellow text is hard to read - and the orangeish text in the about us section - I would prefer to see it white cleaner - and more legible - but overall crisp and nice transitions.
- jaybee0
good crits so far, and very useful, i knew i could count on you guys.
keep 'em coming.......
- iDp0
I want to beat the shit out of that font you have your name in. I mean I really want to kick its fucking ass. It is really really pissing me off like a shot of tequilla and I think it deserves a good beating.
Other then that nice site...kill the yellow text.
- radar0
another thing it's annoying to have the links dropdown everytime you rollover your name- maybe to a text button like you did for sound where you have to click.
- jaybee0
iDp, the font isn't a 100%, i've modified it.
- jevad0
drop the teal bg - it's not doing anything for teh site. a crisp white bg would be nice
- iDp0
no I just dislike the font all together. and I'm going to beat its ass...I already scheduled an appointment.
- monkeyshine0
The yellow/orange backdrop in the photos section is giving me a headache and pulls my eye from the imagery. Also, why not post the first photo..no need to make me click an extra time to see an image.
In the work section, what's up with that? Is there only one piece? I don't get it.
I like the Flash elements but not wild about the colors. The background color looks like hospital-ware. Also not digging the type you used for your name...don't know why exactly but it doesn't move me.
- jaybee0
iDp,
hhahahahaha
- gabriel_pc0
the single link in your single case study doesn't work....not good
- instantok0
i would change the orange photo bg to white and check your border widths...they are inconsistent between horizontal and vertical and the top border is different...also, the first image should open when the section is opened...i think the blue bg in the about section could be white as well w/ a different text color...other than that it would be nice to see some more work
- donbrewer0
In About - try not to start sentences with "it", describe "it" with what "it" is. Also avoid: the, is, and, I, you, they, was, like, maybe, which - any words that are overused. Luv your graphics!