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- Blueman
http://www.bluemandp.com/shark/i…
Thoughts, oppinions, suggestions..
overdone? let me know what you think.Thanks.
- sherman0
i like the shark bitten corner.
- ozhanlion0
the concept can be improved I think. YOu have definitely go easy with the typeface selection, and layout of the text. Personally I am not a bevel fan, and you should tell us if this is going to be static or flash and if so so how it can be improved in that manner..
- kodap0
what site? this is an image with emboss and some flames
- zedvox0
that's fucking horrid.
- jevad0
um....I like the idea but it needs fleshing ut - the chrome look is a bit gimmiky the way it is right now - I think you can make it look a little more pro by flattening it out a little more
- _salisae_0
not trying to sound harsh here BUT bevel bevel texture texture lack of good color scheme flash pan flash pan and your only real telling object - the product - without drop shadow or comfy placement - blood? horribly photoshoped flames did you even think about the font choice?
stop relying on tricks and design it
- Blueman0
Jevad.. what do you mean by flattening out the chrome? Are you talking about reducing the bevel?
As for the others... Not sure about the log bg colour.. right now it's yellowish.. but i'm going to change it..
As for the nav buttons.. i wanted them to be etched in the metal..
The type isn't written in stone either..
I'm more concerned about how you guys feel about the flames..
I was going to make the header and nav. in flash.. the rest will be images/html.
thanks
- BZZZP0
looks a bit like a quick bite of
http://www.choppersinc.com/flash…
which site rocks, percisely because it's way over the top.
- BZZZP0
oops i mean
http://www.choppersinc.com/flash…--chemically awake
- Blueman0
It's true.. i was heavily inspired by this site.. since they make biker frames I wanted to give them a biker style site. I don't think that it's a rip at all.. i just feel that it has a very similar style.
I created most of this site before i even saw that site.
- ricstultz0
Blueman, design it in something other than photoshop. It looks like one huge filter.
Get rid of the flames.
less is always more, don't add much that doesn't have a function.
- Blueman0
I totaly agree with you ricstultz.. that less is more.. but I wanted to create something totally different and I wanted it to really be over the top.. just like a lot of the choppers are once they are done.. all bells and whistles.
- _salisae_0
nice bust bzzzp!!
ha!
- hiphoprelic0
Concept wise, it is sound but the execution lacks.
I like the background image in the box and the fire and metal idea. The rough textures should go with a sharper metal surface to hold together as a theme. I think the flames are a little too litteral. Styalize, bro. We know what flames look like. Give them some style.
All that detail also makes the page load extremely slow.
- hiphoprelic0
nope
- _niko0
http://www.confederate.com/con_w…
envoke a feeling,
scale back,
let the product do the talking.
- Spix0
wow :/
- lvl_130
"www.confederate.com/co...
envoke a feeling,
scale back,
let the product do the talking. "yeah, i sure got a feeling!
first off, the name alone is fucked.
second, it really isn't suprising your name is associated to one of the biggest sweatshop companies known to man!
third, take the confederate flag design.
fourth, tatoo it on your face.
fifth, have fun with the rest of your sad, sorry, ill-informed life.
- _niko0
?
..."third, take the confederate flag design.
fourth, tatoo it on your face.
fifth, have fun with the rest of your sad, sorry, ill-informed life"
what's this supposed to mean?
Blueman is making a site that showcases a motorcycle part manufacturer and i post a link to a clean site that showcases some of the most beautifully sculpted machines that I've ever seen..
Am i missing something?