Clever or Clumsy?
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- dfd
Hey guys,
I'd really like to get your advice on this play of word:
Does it work? Does it have potential? What would you change? Is it just to difficult? Should I get back to work?
Thanks,
Denis
- gruntt0
it has potential... but get back to work.
- brandelec0
i like it, its neat!!
but i think that 'g' is supposed to go after the 'i'
go for it man, very original
- k0na_an0k0
so clever i just ripped it. now it's mine you bastard.
- dfd0
nice one
- mg330
My computerbrain returned the results succesfully in about 5 seconds.
Do you consider that good?
- slice0
why yellow?
- jox0
What the hell is it??
- jevad0
I thought it sucked...then I thought some more...and I think it's great
- el_chilaquil0
i don't get it
- mg330
It's a beverage napkin, right?
- jox0
aaaah, now i see what you're doing. well i be gawdamn, it's pretty clever.
- gruntt0
simplify it. change your name to design.
- dfd0
it's a post-it note i scanned in ... i was jsut doodling and i needed something for a fucking business card (i hate em) ... so i though i'd have a little brain teaser.
if it's not working out, that's cool. as i said, it's just an idea.
- el_chilaquil0
mm... i get it. it's clever, but maybe too clever... depends on what you want to accomplish.
- jevad0
stick with it - its good
- Neuarmy0
rock on. i must be slow tho...took me like 6.235478 seconds...not that i was counting or anything.
- ********0
nice I like
- grayhood0
i think it has potential.
- iDp0
i wouldnt put it on your bc though.
- _salisae_0
feels forced
then again, it depends on your execution and the layout of the bc
but mostly - it feels forced
you could probably get the same effect with color or type style - but having to rearrange three letters to get there .. i don't know ..
best of luck!