Portfolio crit?
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- cucumbrrr
Hey all, getting close to finishing up my portfolio site. There are a bunch of tweaks I plan on making, and the resume links don't work yet... but if ya'll could give it a look and tell me what you think, I would be much obliged. Don't hold back either, I want any and all criticism.
http://www.ihurtnow.com/dan/scho…
- jevad0
fucking wicked!
love audio karate and love that site.....nice
- lvl_130
yeah, what jevad said. looks really solid. not that much work, but what you have looks real nice.
that mike turpen site is kind of fucked up though. when clicking toi other sections creates one layer on top of another. and why does that guy have to transition in every time you click a new section if it's just the same image?
but like i said, looks really solid
- cucumbrrr0
Awesome, thanks for the quick responses guys I appreciate it. That mike turpen site is by far the weakest project in there haha, I must admit that. I've got 2 much better projects near completion, so once those are launched, I think I'm going to take down the Turpen one right quick.
- lvl_130
nice. good call.
- jakeyj0
hot site - but maybe a little less shading on the side, especially on the info page, sort of looks like an overhead projector or something
just a thought
but again, very nice site
- iDp0
Photos in the print section are pretty low quality, maybe bump those up a bit.
Oh and nice text transitions
http://www.gallaga.compretty similar to mine :)
- gabriel_pc0
sorry idp, I don't think expanding circular masks is anything someone can say was their idea.
cool site! I'd actually just make the whole thing larger (dimensions). It feels like you're boxing yourself in a bit too small. Otherwise great!
- iDp0
sorry gabriel but thats not what I said or implied. Because everyone knows that I invented tween masks in the first place.
:)
- backspace0
its not bad.
sort of a derivative style and i have to say that i hate pixel fonts, but not bad at all.
- Tara0
i agree with gabriel about it being small, but overall very nice. good job!
- Nac0
tween masks have a new name = tommy teeny tweens.....
- iDp0
betta recognize suckah! haha
- cucumbrrr0
Just checked out your site iDP, and you're right the masking is sorta similar but I promise it is not a rip! I'm making a list of all the good suggestions I'm getting, maybe a little less compression on the print images, maybe make everything a little larger, tone down the shading. Thanks everybody who has replied so far, it's very helpful.
- iDp0
Yeah for sure I wasn't even saying it was, so I'm sorry if thats the way it came off. I like that effect when used over text. You've got a great start so far, very nice feeling to the site. Keep up the good work!
- Nac0
iDp Ripped the raindrops on water effect.
- jevad0
yeah I would consider making it a bit bigger too....
- quoobdsn0
iDp ripped off my drop shadows and georgia font. boo yah!
- iDp0
Im a rip rip rippin machine
watch me get down
watch me get downNac I only ripped the raindrop effect because you told me it was the new dripping deer.
Emerson....I'm gunna drop shadow your head next time we hang out. :P
- Nac0
haha, iDp stole my boxers!!
- iDp0
*pokes Nac in the eye
designer fight designer fight!