Ad crit?
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- BonSeff0
#2 bottom right is ace
- Soler0
Agreed. The rest are bunk.
- jevad0
what tweedledum and tweedledee said
- bulletfactory0
yeppers
- grayhood0
agreed.
- BonSeff0
im gonna go ahead and agree with ya'll agreeing with me
- warheros0
i concur.
- stewart0
the font mixture is not good.
read the article written by typographer Martin Majoor about this subject, as posted already today...
The headache of mixing type:
http://www.typotheque.com/articl…
- zedvox0
fonts and the colors are not doing it for me
the stripes can be fun if you choose nicer colors..the one that everyone likes..i like but it doesnt make me go wowie.
- stewart0
at least choose one with a higher contrast, like the brown/white one.
the other ones are not ad-like, because you can't read them or due to boring colors.
- lilbabyarm0
this is an ad? looks flat. how about actual photos of her interior design?
- okaybro0
zapf chancery should be illegal.
- stewart0
it IS illegal.
but Monaco, Sand, Lucida Handwriting, Comic Sans and Scala Sans are even more illegal. when used together.
- shotgunflat0
I, too, think #2 bottom right is hands down best.
- Moo0
I, think #2 bottom right is hands down best. By that I mean the dark red it kick arse compared to the rest. Looks really nice....
- mennik0
Without actual pictures makes it look a bit flat and businesscard alike.
- save0
Weak typography and lame pastel colours never work, but thats only my opinion.....
- era4040
hey guys,
thanks for the help! i'm trying to get a feel for her target audience and i was worried that #2 bottom right didn't fit w/ rich house-wifes in Long Island.
Unfortunately, she doesn't want photography and is married to her logo, which is Medici Script, not Zapf Chancery.
Anyone know any rich LI housewifes I can bounce this off of?
- ribit0
I dont think theres a clash of typefaces... as long as her logo is more obviously treated as a graphic logo, i.e. clearly differentiated from the other type so that it doesnt appear as a type element (bolder/bigger, other color??)
- Nairn0
#1, top left & #2 bottom right are touching me in a special place.