Website crit
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- canuck0
No samples of work?
- iDp0
at least we know where you are located.
- rasko40
not much to see is there?
- waynepixel0
Its good to see you have not used Pixel font. for all the god dam text.
Where is the rest of the site.
- swollenelbow0
eeeeeeks!
- Soler0
The nav text looks OK, but the copy is too bold. It looks horsey to me. And I still think the "s" is funky in the logo.
And, what everyone else said. where's the work?
- Innovate0
its just a holding page for now, more coming soon, just wanted crit on the look and style, cheers
- tny0
open the leading!
- Innovate0
we are just starting out and gettin something on the net for the time being,
- rasko40
whats with the multiple usernames?
- Innovate0
theres two of us, in the office at the mo :)
- rasko40
oh.. confuses my little mind
- iDp0
weird I kind of dig the 'S'...maybe its early in the morning for me.
- swollenelbow0
yeah i'm way confused...
- iDp0
agreed.
- Innovate0
there was also this way we did with the text bigger, which way do u prefer
the current
http://www.instil-design.co.uk
or
thanks, me and my partner are debating and would like a third opinion
- Elfangio0
Like it: simple&fast
- iDp0
I dont really see much of a difference between the two...but yes the content text competes too much visually with your nav...toy with colors and sizes until it feels right, YO!
- swollenelbow0
that's 3 more buttons than you need man, break it up into a few more sections, come up with something...
address, phone, email is only 1 category: Contact.
I know you're "soft" launching or whatever but really, get something else up there...
yeah, makes no difference if it's big or small... try to concentrate on more improtant details...
- Clear0
I second "TNY", fix the leading on the content text.. rest looks good for a temp page.