Logo Crit
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- b_magallanes0
I like the way 'blueman' part of the logo is going, but the 'design & photography is too prominent. Maybe try going down to half the point size it is and kern it out much more. Or just make it half as small and right justify it...
- swollenelbow0
blueman, didn't we cri this like a year ago?
- ganon0
the blueman font is better suited for a day spa worm farm logo...what are you trying to communicate with the mark?..that your are a happy guy?..surf the web and get some inspiration...such as...:
- rasko40
make the 'des & photog' smaller, maybe so it start just after the gold 'e'. The 'L' looks a bit wobble and I think maybe the 'b' should be slanted more, along with the 'L', maybe the 'L' should have a loop. just some suggsts
- Blueman0
lol no that was my old logo .. I'm making a new one cuz I'm offering photography services now, and I need it to be a part of the logo
- meok0
- Blueman0
lol no!
I think that's someone from Blueman Group
- Blueman0
*bump
- warheros0
the blueman part needs to be more cohesive. and why is there a face in it? do you specialize in portraits? dont do stuff because "it looks cool" or because "it's pretty" or some shit.
more definition, a more "confident" approach?
- Bluejam0
It's more holiday than company, fun rather than professional and charming, not memorable.
If your clients are in the tourist industry the logo will work, win projects and make you money otherwise...
- Blueman0
argh!!
I think it's back to the drawing boards for me..
F*ck!
- oeuf0
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- Soler0
I like the logotype. I would choose a different font for the tag though.
I think it would look really clean and pro to get rid of the yellow lines and just match the font from the logotype, all lowercae, underneath in gray. That is enough of a speration for the tag, you know- color and size.
- spendogg0
I like the one with the pictogram of a blue man (like the bathroom signs) - or was that last years.
- Dancer0
I like what you were doing with your previous one – they idea of putting a face in the logo, if you use thi sidea then I think you should in corporate it into the 'man' part not the 'bleu' part.
Why are you calling the company Blueman - just curious.
THe second one is cleaner but perhaps you could still have a little typographic twist, maybe use the 'ee as an eye...i dunno, but your getting there.
keep plugin' and you'll get it
Good luck
- Soler0
I like #3 on that new page the best.... is it less bold than the logotype though? could just be the size. What does it look like centered?
btw, the face in the logo seems abit cheesey and unpro, sorry.
- _salisae_0
why is the e tilted?