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- cosmo
Should I add anything else? Is there anything missing? I just noticed couple of typos will fix them in a little bit.
- backspace0
please also make an HTML version and a PDF version.
i don't mind the colour per se, but i think you'd do well to tool around with the layout a bit.
http://www.ibeginwithanidea.com/…
didier, as usual, has the hotness.
- Soler0
I would kill the references section. If they want them they'll ask.
I agree about the color lines too.. not helping at all. Looks good tho
- skt0
could maybe do with a little more in the objective. reads a bit like "to get a job"
- Neuarmy0
i would say to pick a new font...looks really dithered.
- cosmo0
thanks guys, will change it around a bit.
Do you think i need to specify little more on wat I did?
- cosmo0
didier makes me feel like crap.
:(
- cosmo0
anyone else?
- buddylee0
I would praise allah somewhere in the resume. Just so they know where you are coming from.
- rasko40
I'd make the heirarchy a bit clearer, make the typer under the first line of each header (or name of Uni) smaller, and I'd see if it works with not using the italics.
- cosmo0
I would praise allah somewhere in the resume. Just so they know where you are coming from.
buddylee
--------------------------------...is that suppose to be funny?
- ms790
ohhh, is it cold in here or is that just you ?
- _salisae_0
hey cosmo! definitely change the colors. check out a color book from the library - that'll give you some color combinations that are sure to please! also, look into creating some indentations within the body of the categories - clearly define where title and the description are. easier to read that way.
maybe put a little bit of color within the text.
why separate your addy from phone and e-mail? make your name large on the left and place your addy above or below other contact info.
also, you spell university at one point and then abbreviate it at another - just do one or the other. you should capitalize any acronyms (ex. PHP)
can you place any links to work you've done?
best of luck!
shari
- rasko40
no dont change the colours, they go perfectly with the type, it gives it a really authentic 60's feel, I think the split addie and tel is ok too, but I'd make them a a bit smaller.
just my opinion tho.. daft eh?!
- cosmo0
will change them and post here later. Thanks guys.
- _salisae_0
rasko is right - maybe throw some tye-dye effects in there too cus the 60s have everything to do w/ you getting a job as a web developer.
- cosmo0
hahahah.
- zedvox0
remove the color bars yaar
keep it simple,yaarand buddylee, shut up.
- rasko40
yeah you're right silas, changing the colors will definately be the difference between getting and not getting a job.
- cosmo0
tfs and grayhood in here now. That would be just a classic fight to watch "Rasko vs Salisae"
- buddylee0
Also, don't forget to mentioned that you worked at your uncles 7-11 for one summer.