quick crit please
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- Soler0
Hey spmitch, I'm in Denver too.
Are you really in the D-town or are you suburban?
- spmitch0
17th and Champa
- Soler0
Schweet. Thats a great parta town
- jevad0
damn...where did all these denverites come from suddenly...all outta the woodwork n'shit.
we should have a denver NT meetup
- spmitch0
except for the giant blue QWEST light i can see it out of all my windows
- Soler0
Yeah, at the Streets of London pub. that place is fun. I went there on St. Pattys for green pabsts all night for a dolla.
- Soler0
You WILL bow to telecommunication giants
- spmitch0
I wan t to buy a gun and shoot them out
- dablammit0
I am feelin the first one and the last two. Don't care for the Chrysler Star at all, I would trash them.
- heavyt0
i like the ones where the images integrates with the text best.
the flower thing (2,3,7) seems weak to me.
i like either 1 or 9.
TR1ps. what kinda company is it?
my impression is that they do somethign modular, liek servers or something
- k0na_an0k0
1
the others i see the chrysler symbol and the bp symbol. it's subtle but it's there.
- jevad0
man are you using arial?
the type is so boring...and I still don't get what the logo is supposed to present....
- swollenelbow0
yeah i'm liking 1, but can you makes these a bit bigger for viewing? how are you presenting these to the client?
mess around with 1's elements a bit...
- Soler0
I'm with jevad on finding a different font... But I like 5 the best. The rest look forced. Need a little work
- spmitch0
no arial
helveticaIt a bio tech co.
gene sythesisjust started today need to show client next week
- spmitch0
gene synthesis
- Soler0
Why not then illustrate a gene? I've seen some tech gene drawings that look pretty cool
Something like this, but more simplified-
- spmitch0
yes but it has been so over used..google the word gene and that is all you will see
the company provides machine used in labs that do the gene synthesis
- Soler0
I find it hard to believe that it is impossible to come up with a creative stylization of a gene.
But if you are then going the machine / gear route then just keep working.
- k0na_an0k0
illustrate a huge weiner. bet knowone has done that before for gene synthesis.