quick crit please
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- dablammit0
I am feelin the first one and the last two. Don't care for the Chrysler Star at all, I would trash them.
- heavyt0
i like the ones where the images integrates with the text best.
the flower thing (2,3,7) seems weak to me.
i like either 1 or 9.
TR1ps. what kinda company is it?
my impression is that they do somethign modular, liek servers or something
- k0na_an0k0
1
the others i see the chrysler symbol and the bp symbol. it's subtle but it's there.
- jevad0
man are you using arial?
the type is so boring...and I still don't get what the logo is supposed to present....
- swollenelbow0
yeah i'm liking 1, but can you makes these a bit bigger for viewing? how are you presenting these to the client?
mess around with 1's elements a bit...
- Soler0
I'm with jevad on finding a different font... But I like 5 the best. The rest look forced. Need a little work
- spmitch0
no arial
helveticaIt a bio tech co.
gene sythesisjust started today need to show client next week
- spmitch0
gene synthesis
- Soler0
Why not then illustrate a gene? I've seen some tech gene drawings that look pretty cool
Something like this, but more simplified-
- spmitch0
yes but it has been so over used..google the word gene and that is all you will see
the company provides machine used in labs that do the gene synthesis
- Soler0
I find it hard to believe that it is impossible to come up with a creative stylization of a gene.
But if you are then going the machine / gear route then just keep working.
- k0na_an0k0
illustrate a huge weiner. bet knowone has done that before for gene synthesis.
- jevad0
what soler said - you could make so much of this but at the moment it's dead in teh water - deviod of any emotion.
- spmitch0
lol
not human genes
- spmitch0
thanks
i will have to go have a marg and think about
- Soler0
don't animal / plant genes still look cool? Represent growth, etc?
Or are they jeans.
- spmitch0
how do you synthesis jeans?
- Soler0
By organic synthesis and polymer chemistry applied to nanoscience and nanotechnology with emphasis on the design, fundamental understanding, synthesis, and applications of functional macromolecules of jeans
- Soler0
I'll be here all week folks
- spmitch0
don't forget to tip your waitresses