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- williamb
Brand identity for Digital Agency specialising in Luxury Brands.
This is the stationary and identity proposal. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
Many Thx
WB
- save0
doesn't look very digital...
- williamb0
their client base is high end bond st. espq brands, they don't want to be seen as a digital agency. Check their site and you can see thir work..
- rasko40
I like the comp slip because it begins to add some life and something more contemporary in feeling, the other stuff looks terribly staid and the heirarchy of info on the business card looks a real mess.
Try adding some colour to the other elements or something that looks a little more considered.
- Bluejam0
why don't you stick the '*brand intelligence' copy under the 'CTS' logo and give it that pink/red colour? At the moment it seems to be just 'floating' around the place.
Is it wish to design into the letter head 'yours sincerely'...plus it stands out way too much for something that really isn't that significant compared to the logo or '*brand intelligence'.
my2c's
- rasko40
yeah plus you would have to have different sign-off letters for 'faithfully' etc as obviously 'sincerely' is not always appropriate.
- williamb0
Thanks guys, i am working ur ideas up, an playinng arounf ith the information. Keep the ideas flowing...
wb
- Bluejam0
On a second glance, I'm now not sure on the typeface you've used for 'CTS'. It seems a bit spaced out and the balance (forced by the T) is left heavy, ie the C is wider than the S. Might I suggest just a little distortion or several versions exploring typography?
- mase0
I immidiatley wanted the little star in *brand intelligence to pink and nothing else......but then it all looks a bit *Wallpaper........however the four little dots on the site next to CTS could replace the * ...seems to all tie in a bit better then......?????
maybe!!