Illustration Crit
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- dopepope0
for someone that's not really an illustrator, it's damn good. The girl looks great. (looks a lot like another illustrator whose name escapes me)
I see issues with the guy. You need reference. It's hard to fake it or do it from memeory if you don't have a vivid image of it in your head. start looking thru mags or online or thru photos, whatever. Or take a pic. But you'll need visual ref to render that guy convincingly.
- Linda0
ok thanx. You mean jason brooks huh (hed kandi illus). Yeah, I know, but that's exactly what the client wants, so can't help it. But I made the girl more natural, not that skinny as he does ;)
I tried to look for some pictures, but it's hard to find a good one. But I'll try to search harder. thnxany more suggestions / crits?
- carver0
is the darkie jerking off on the chick?
- dopepope0
some pointers...
have some indication of a water line. It will put the water glistening on her body in a more obvious context (hence the masturbation question). It will also make the background less geometric and more natural.
Also, mush up that shadow under her, she's not a perfect oval.
Now, if these things are 'your style', or 'your signature', then ignore me.
- soda0
carver...twat.
- rabattski0
dunno if you have a digital camera. if so ask someone to pose (that way you can have the pose you want) or shoot it from a magazine / book (then again you could also scan it).
- TNDAP0
Nice illo.
Carver keep your racist comments to yourself prick, now let's refer to the broadcast manual.
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- Tyrone0
politically correct or not Carver...... that was funny.
- Linda0
hey carver, is that you on that pic? If so, man I'm sorry to hear...
thanx guys for the advice, there will be water and stuff, I was planning to do that later.
- TNDAP0
politically correct or not Carver...... that was funny.
Tyrone
(may 6 04, 09:05)That just makes you as ignorant as the first asshole.
- Mimio0
Thew stomach and arms look ace ..you just need to tighten up the neck and face.
- fifty500
skeet skeet skeet
- GreedoLives0
i would add an indication of bathing suit on the man.
he does look naked.
- Ell0
i think a darker shade on his scalp would help
- GreedoLives0
awesome! A+
- Linda0
thanks :D
- dopepope0
looks a lot tighter. Nice job.
- Mimio0
I'd put the sun in there. Otherwise I think it's really nice.
- Linda0
ok I'll do that, maybe some shells and a crab in the sand too...