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- postulant
ya'll flame'd my last website so bad! I felt the need to overhaul the entire thing.
this is my first attempt at coding in XML.....
any comments? suggestions?
- atomica0
I don't recall your previous design, but some suggestions and comments toward this from me would be first and for most - everything is anti-aliased and compressed beyond reason... making all your work seem dirty, bland and boring (imo). I want to say the sight looks slopped together, but that'd be too cliche' with your choice of background ;) There's room for improvement in organization and execution, but I think its functional.... if that counts for much
- contribute0
I don't like that you have to close each section before looking at another (if it's near the bottom). I think you should be able to have all the sections open and be able to click on any of them. Hence, you need a scroll bar in the menu.
- lind0
It's kind of confusing how the first thing you see is a blank white rectangle. The title tag says "Who or What is BD?" And the URL says Sparksdesign.
You should immediately explain what your site is about.
- ikbenvanrijn0
Enter response:
where is the submit button on the left??
there is a sharpen thing in photoshop. also at 1st glance, thought i had to fill in a form.
your images have artifats too. maybe poor export.
nice concept though. A+ for that, but in a whole the execution was weak.
maybe show us a jpeg 1st before you do all the work in programming
nice concept again by the way
- reaper0
nope...still sucks try again please
- meok0
Hey I think I saw inobe in one of your flash movie. Could it be?
- postulant0
HAHHA YES! that is inobe! small world