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- pushme
All suggestions welcome.
Oh and a before I recieve a host of remarks regarding the company...a client is a client :)
- rasp0
I'd choose my dummy text more carefully if i was you
- fate0
yes, I've got to agree with rasp, unless it's a joke ;)
Might work on a better contrast in the left menu and for the title, to make the stuff stand out. Looks nice in general though, nothing major to complain about.
- rasko40
hahah yeah, you gotta love the testimonials
- fate0
"But depending how far we are inside...as many as thrity men will form a bucket brgade and carry debris to the surface."
- pushme0
hahaha...i didn't even look at the dummy content. how ironic.
- scarabin0
ha ha.
- yoshi_pc0
hey push
I think you have a clean, decent looking aesthetic established, but it seems a little unbalanced. The beige framework you have on the left there I would use to cradle the entire comp. Build some framework out of it to give your copy and imagery some love. The right side of the comp with the photo and dummy text looks a little lonely, a little misplaced. Some smaller things, did they give you that photo of the flower? If you don't have to use it I would consider some other imagery. Last but not least, allow some spacing between your nav titles and the color square icons that represent them. Space is good :)
hope this helps
- deepanal0
I've been meaning to get one... do you get one on the house for doing the site?
- rasp0
so you change the dummy copy
but now it reads:Contact. made even more difficult by the hardness of the debris filling its chambers. Pick
Sometime over the weekend the Six-wheeled robot was to grind into the upper part of a rocky outcrop dubed 'el-capitan'...
Last week the rover drilled into a different section ofthe glossy formation that has intrigued scientists...
hmm.
Try again?
- bull0
was going to say my piece, but yoshi already said it. I agree with him, innit
- pushme0
Thanks for the comments...especially Yoshi's. Very helpful.