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• yoshi_pc0

  hey push

  I think you have a clean, decent looking aesthetic established, but it seems a little unbalanced. The beige framework you have on the left there I would use to cradle the entire comp. Build some framework out of it to give your copy and imagery some love. The right side of the comp with the photo and dummy text looks a little lonely, a little misplaced. Some smaller things, did they give you that photo of the flower? If you don't have to use it I would consider some other imagery. Last but not least, allow some spacing between your nav titles and the color square icons that represent them. Space is good :)

  hope this helps

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