critique please
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- North_20
Looks like you've been a busy man...bada bum.
- mcfly0
not bad--overall a nice aesthetic, good navigationfew thoughts:
lose the clock and date--distraction and does nothing other than show you could do it.
I'd reduce the "Real" "life" etc--too big. Type choice there is OK, but I'd try tying into their logo face more so it doesn't clash. At a bare minimum, usine Helvetica? seems at odds w/ their logo face--one is more humanistic, the other swiss/geometric.
The typting out at the bottom on clicks for "life" etc is a bit slow--painful to watch. I also wish it were at the top below where the clock is since it's a location indicator.
- b_magallanes0
Nice...I usually don't like background music, but it work here...the subtle sound of the crickets...gives the site an "ambiance". Maybe add a button to turn off the sound though. If you can keep the same high quality photography through out, it'll be a very nice site.
I like the look of this version too:
- jevad0
http://www.venuatgrayhawk.com/be…
that one is way better imho....
- abizzyman0
yeah...
.... i'm kind of stuck going this direction...
... this is one of those times when the client's FAMILY felt they needed to add their creative two cents and screw up the entire APPROVED look.
I don't mind the new look - I just wish the colors and paper were still there. Not much I can do but fast-track this sucker now... they just approved to direction.
- piperboytoy0
I like the drop down, very slick. Not sure if I like the black bg, maybe you should try a dark brown or dark blue. Black is so unfriendly
- tripleflux0
dude, the paper/light background looked better. the menus are showing up as aliased device fonts for me.