critique please
critique please
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- mcfly0
not bad--overall a nice aesthetic, good navigationfew thoughts:
lose the clock and date--distraction and does nothing other than show you could do it.
I'd reduce the "Real" "life" etc--too big. Type choice there is OK, but I'd try tying into their logo face more so it doesn't clash. At a bare minimum, usine Helvetica? seems at odds w/ their logo face--one is more humanistic, the other swiss/geometric.
The typting out at the bottom on clicks for "life" etc is a bit slow--painful to watch. I also wish it were at the top below where the clock is since it's a location indicator.