biz card critique
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- BonSeff0
oh monkeyshine, this new look is so metro!
fuck that! your first set was yours and way more creative. revert baby
- ********0
flowers are better..
- sexypixel0
it needs a monkey.
the two m's could be seperated and put a monkeys eyes between them, so it looks like a monkey peering over a wall.
more monkey
- ********0
i feel the idea is getting 'masculinified' here..
maybe some more women should join this thread and help monkeyshine out!
- sexypixel0
more monkey
- BonSeff0
now with 35% more masculinified
lol
- ********0
more masculinified monkey
*nods
- fresnobob0
pretty much photoshop in 1990...and thats a bad thing
- nicora20
IMHO, i like the font, but a huge prob with the background on both sides. find a way to use that negative space on the info side to your advantage.
- smellvetica0
i don't really see any cohesion between what you're trying to show. you're selling yourself and your skills, so what does flowers and buildings have to do with graphic/web design?
unless used as a metaphor.. hi-rise did some sweet cards.. i'll find the link.
i think you should hold on this designand possibly revisit the whole 'brand'. it's quite fun to do as well you know! ;)
- monkeyshine0
wow...ya'll are hard core! But I do appreciate your tough love. It's helping me. I am attempting to do a design brief for myself. Hopefully clarity will one day be mine.
...I'm not putting monkeys on my ID though. nuh..uh. no way.