bcard critique
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- redFridge0
interesting.
i think the white m separates itself a bit from the grey iller, at least enough that it will make sense after i introduce myself.
which one on the right do you like?
- TransFatty0
nice card
i don't think you need the upside down text tho
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i think it isnt as - er powerful as it seems.the shape of the card is unique enuf that clients etc will know you're special ... the upside down text doesnt kill me but it doesnt really knock me out. it just makes it harder to know your name.
- redFridge0
thanks tf, what is your opinion on right or left?
- cirrus0
I personally think you need to increase the tracking on all that text below your name. Squishing the letters together that much aint' too good for readability.
Well done design though... I like the colors you've chosen for sure.
- scarabin0
i like that one.
- pr20
left - more exciting.
right is boring and trying too hard.
- rasp0
check your mail in a sec redfridge. just a quick rough for you to consider
- rasp0
i was wrong about the flipping of the card i think too.
- TransFatty0
it's all the same to me - left or right Mark...
add your telephone # and move on to the next project.
- brundlefly0
gonna say left, perspective is the key to interesting illustration, betcha the mobs of people you card will be quite impressed...
I know my old illustration professor would beat me up if I went with the one with the straight edges.
- rasp0
times change
- redFridge0
questions answers:
price on two layer stock, 1000 printed $240
font: AvantGarde Bk BT
- redFridge0
they are here :)
- brooke0
Ace, Marky.
- 3rror4040
ouch!, they look good!... mail me one...
- peteski0
thanks for the update and and and you listened. they look great really,
- XC010
great job, impressive finished product!
cool site too.