bcard critique
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- Nematoth0
I'd go for the right..
Just because it's more rectangular and will fit in my business card book better.. and you can fit one more service in at the same type size...
Not much difference between them though is there? :-)
- redFridge0
thanks for the feedback,
you are right, not much difference.. just a bit tighter on the lower perspective.
I think the left is stronger visually for the graphic, but the right lends itself to the type, and also will fit the bcard holder as you stated. :)
- JamesEngage0
Right... correct balance for the style... other makes it appear too toony...
are you mark miller or mark willer?
- redFridge0
mark miller.. too much? i sort of like it. hopefully after introducing myself and giving them the card they could remember.
- JamesEngage0
i personally thik that you should keep the miller the same way up but reversed... othersie gives that kind of weirdness where you're not sure if it is a m or a w
- contribute0
Right for sure, very nice.
- solmo0
right
like it
- bug0
yea, i wasn't too sure what yer name was either...
- nessdog0
right!
- rasp0
right.
but watch your spacing. the type on that one is very near the edge.
i agree with the willer/miller thing. cant tell which.
- rasp0
assume its willer though
- rasp0
personally i'd spin the card round though, so the larger space is at the top [your name will probably sit better like that]
then i'd increase the leading in the 'des,prod,ani.int.usability' list and reduce the leading on the email/url a bit.
just my thoughts
- mbr0
How much is it going to cost to get this printed and cut?
Nice job. I agree about the name, though. They may be snazzy enough you don't need to do tricks.
- foxz0
i think the left...has a bit more edge to it. more dynamic.
- foxz0
nice job. em wht s the font type? if u dont mind me askin.
ps...the willer miller thing. confusing. best turned upright i think.
- peteski0
it looks like your name is jelli mark
- save0
...one side should be a full bleed of a fridge door, and the text could be fridge magnets...just a suggestion!!!
god am bored!!!
- propa0
Both are nice but I say left.
More edge. Mister Willer!
- JamesEngage0
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