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- smallT0
As a start, the name is color tech and the logo/site should communicate that.
Think color, industry, etc. Seems you have a lot to work with.
I see you are going for a "clean" look, which I like, though you could spuce it up a bit with color.
good luck!
- Jnr_Madison0
Linky no worky for me.
- elwolverton0
Where would you suggest implementing color? I'm not much for a super-colorful background, and the owner just wants something really basic. So I have to be careful how much pizaz i stick in there.
- elwolverton0
anyone care to criticize?
i have lost all judgement by ignoring sleep.
- smallT0
sleep.
Then, maybe utilize some good impact colors such as red or a combination thereof to evoke a feeling of energy and / or excitement. It can stay simple yet have energy...geeze, sorry about the buzz words.
- elwolverton0
http://www.csun.edu/~wolvert/col…
There's what I've done so far.
What can I do to improve?
Different options?
- Jnr_Madison0
Much better. Seems quite small though.
- Jnr_Madison0
"If you want us to paint your box, please feel free to contact us"
Class.
- brundlefly0
yeah. all I would say is that it's about 550 wide and the standard now is 760-70 for min rez....
love the lavender you added a few posts ago, makes it seem though out.
dont like the left aligned and right aligned images in the one body of text.....
go wider, photos a little bigger and balanced in the same size....
hire a copywriter
- elwolverton0
eet ees veree small
beecause:
all ov thee peepol who see eet weel bee owld or wif shittee compewtahs.
iz dee target awdeeyance.
- brundlefly0
shitae is fine ye gooper mulchin'
still for tae a 800 x 6 odd dualies, playes well with ye uotres nono?
- elwolverton0
a copywriter?
- brundlefly0
"f*ck the bozos"
b. pitt - 12 monkeys
- cyberthug0
Whoa... You're hurting my eyes with this one. I'm about to come off like a total dick, but seriously, let me give you some advice: NEVER USE OBVIOUS DESIGN SOLUTIONS. If someone else is doing it, DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT. The diagonal line background is bugging me, bigtime. Also, don't give up on the type - this could look dope if properly kerned. Just keep playing with kerning, size relationships, leading, and the magic WILL happen. You have a good sense of body copy which will serve you well on this job. Industrial Factory shit... think Bauhaus, Industrial Evolution/Revolution. Russian Constructivist, Die Brucke...
- elwolverton0
for reference, i was asked to stay dirt-ass simple and safe with this site.
so, i'll have to save the Industrial Revolution for next time.
- cyberthug0
that's the problem right there. accepting what you're given and not using it as a PAID oppurtunity to grow... Unless of course you aint gettin' paid shit, and you just wanna get it out the door... but why ask for a critique? you must care about it...
- elwolverton0
i am getting paid shit.
but i always care.
and this is me growing.
(coz i suck).
- cyberthug0
i'm not saying that you suck at all. it just needs more time input to be really good. if it's just for some quick dough, don't invest energy into caring too much about how it looks.