Site Crit
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- yellowant
feed back appreciated...
http://www.mochdesign.biz/mochDI've been doing beads jewelry for 2+ years...finally put up a site to showcase it..and may be make some money so I can buy more material...
I'm not good in writing...
if someone willing to help me with the description...that'll be great !..I'll make you some jewelry as return(^_^)
- JazX0
it's not bad, I would maybe use the pixel .gifs on the outside background than in the center area. Color scheme is nice, jewelry is nice. Your a female? :)
- solmo0
looks nice. female?
- yellowant0
Thankz JazX.
yah. female here (^_^)u think the pattern is a little too much to put behind the image ?
- toastie0
it's female! quick, everyone!
- JazX0
I mean yes and no, I just think you might do well with it on the total background and then using another shade of pink (darker) behind the images. It's a nice start. :)
- stewart0
common guys...
- solmo0
:))))))
- yellowant0
Hey... wait a min...
take your # plz__
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(^o^)
( : )
- JazX0
yellowrant this place is super masculine, no props, people feel threatened by Gay Tv shows too, no worries :)
- yellowant0
OK
reminder :
post title is SITE CRIT
- toastie0
JazX started it :)
- JazX0
not to gross you out, but a site such as this style-only: http://suicidegirls.com/ might be an example of what I mean and sorry I know your female and this is a female porn site but well designed. :)
- yellowant0
hee hee...wokie
So, you GUYS wanna buy some jewelry for GF or GFs ? (^_*)
- yellowant0
oo..thanks
that's a nice BG....
- stewart0
there are just two things in their mind:
(*)(*)
- stewart0
well, that little thingie for the cellphone looks nice (but 15 dollar!)
is it possible to put something in there? (second SIM-card or something)
- toastie0
yep, parentheses and multiplication signs.
- ganon0
i like the site, color scheme, and the products...functionally, it works well too...what makes it look unprofessional is the photography...the shots need to be color-corrected...the 3 shots of one product often look different, with no set exposure... sometimes one is taken with a flash, etc...get a tripod and set up for all products, then color-correct & levels/curves in PS....
- yellowant0
too pricy ?
it's all handmade by me...
no sweat shop labor...
- solmo0
Woehaaaaaa