check me out - crit please
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- kibuchi
http://www.delicatetectonics.net…
please be gentle - first timer
- dstlb0
The button rollover noise is a bit painful, maybe something smoother would work better with the calm look that the site has.
Nice work.
- kibuchi0
thanks dstlb
okey dokey will do. I wondered about that too.
There are still a couple of little glitches on there but I wanted to get a general opinion before i do anything else.
- zaven0
nice and simple
I-m not a fan of the gradient background, those colors maybe....
- save0
from a quick glance it looks very nice. The only thing which I would say is Maybe show bigger thumbnails of your work!?!?
- rasp0
seems nice to me, but yeah the noise.. wow.. its like digital scratching of chalkboards
- kibuchi0
ok so the sounds are to go then.
not sure about making the thumbnails any bigger, don't want to make download any slower - but I'll bear it in mind.
cheers all
- mrdobolina0
nice work kibuchi, bu the sounds, egads.
- kibuchi0
i must be deaf, i wuite like the sounds but everyone hates them.
they are SO deleted!
thanks
- stewart0
looks ok.
detail:
when i click on the number 1/2/3 of the examples, it is a bit strange that your work is coming endless from the right to the left.
- Blofeldt0
I like it, nice, pic, nice fonts, works well, i'd push your nokia work a bit more, not sure how.
Haven't got speaks on so don't know about the button noise.
I like the gradient too.
- kibuchi0
I think I love you Blofeldt.
- unknown0
worked at teletext did you?
so did i.
- JamesEngage0
i like it... but... I don't think you need to squash everything in that letter box format comes across very heavy... not a lot of space for things to breathe
also the rollover navigation... the bars would look cool if they resized to the section you are over.
- ian0
Really cool site, very clean and easy on the eye.
One thing, not sure about the word 'scroll' on the scroll bar, a little distracting from the text.
Didn't have the sound turned on, but maybe some looping ambients country-side sounds, very low in the bg?
Other than that, good work young man!
- brundlefly0
the sound is like if you could pluck a nail down a chalk board sound....
(does that make sense?)
and the blue loader is right at the beginning, pew, like the rest....
miss the sun here....canada.
- kibuchi0
ok, blue loader is out of there too. I did have reservations about that.
you guys may not have much sun but you get all the fun snow!
- kibuchi0
not at teletext, just on a teletext system, but thanks for paying attention!
- livia0
i find it interesting but i find that your work is to small and eaten by yiur text. Bigger thumnails are missing
- ozhanlion0
yeah the sound is a little bit distracting rather than supporting, giving a heavy drop feel, maybe it is my headphones.
and I think engage is right, adding a more transition well may well work on that site, and maybe using a little bit smaller font may make it have some air.
they are just suggestions, other than that nice portfolio and clean one.
keep it up
oz.