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- robbob
can everyone check it out? i know most of the links section have incorrect urls at this stage, but otherwise?
On the lookout for work in Melbourne in the new year.
- stewart0
the only thing i don't like is that car on top of every page.
- vespa0
very nice.
like the layout & work. nice touch how you have the nav repeating. only comment would be that there's loads of text in that intro, and although it's visually working it's an awfully long line to try and get your eye across (optimum being 10 words per line). I know I wasn't arsed reading it but then I was always going to go straight for the eye candy anyway.
- robbob0
excellent guys thanks - keep it coming please everyone
- robbob0
cmon guys - any other commnets?
- JamesEngage0
my balls have shrivelled up trying to read that small type...
otherwise i like the rest of it.