site crit / update
site crit / update
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- vespa0
very nice.
like the layout & work. nice touch how you have the nav repeating. only comment would be that there's loads of text in that intro, and although it's visually working it's an awfully long line to try and get your eye across (optimum being 10 words per line). I know I wasn't arsed reading it but then I was always going to go straight for the eye candy anyway.