:-) Logo Crit
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- fues0
2 & 6
- unfittoprint0
1, 2 & 6.
probably 6, leaf slightly bigger.
- sauerbraten0
#6 or #10, but the leaf needs to be drawn better.
- takashi0
2 or 10 here.
- ********0
2, 6 or 1
- Bluejam0
I like the idea of the tree but the one you've used seems to cartoony.
I'd try some other typefaces. Stick with serifs but lighter weights...
Number 8 is a good start but needs work....
- swollenelbow0
funny, i picked the numbers in my head, 2 or 6, and you guys picked similarly.
you should def. get a better leaf for 2. 6 is nice tho...i would try to see if you could make the font an bit thinner. it's too bold for me...
- jevad0
6 or 10 - good work!
- SLAZ0
i like the leaf, but the font is too bold. try some other fonts...
- drzoom0
2 or 10
- solmo0
Yes but make it cool.
- Blueman0
alright.. let me wip up some changes for you guys/gals.
- Jnr_Madison0
2 / 10
- jevad0
1 or 3
again - nice!
- TResudek0
Number 2 but make the stem thicker so that it matches the width of the white swoosh.
TR
- sauerbraten0
the leaf needs alot of work, you should spend a bunch of time just getting that right, then spend some time getting the right typeface, hopefully both together will make a great logo.
if you create a distinct mark from the leaf, it can be used as an independent element as well.
- sauerbraten0
whipping up changes can't really result in a refined mark, you should spend a bunch of time getting it right, take the suggestions and got back and work through it
- unformatted0
2 looks like a torch.
leaf needs more detail and refinement to make it look like a leaf. (like some ppl said)


